Matt Decker

A well written poem. Well done.

The technical aspects of poetry are not my strong point, but the sentiments are appropriate for our times.

I see what yoi're saying and a lot of people will relate to it. A lot of us have had to give up on a dream for one reason or another. Some of us fail using one way, then find another that works. Some people loose one dream but find another that fills the gap. Others are not so lucky.

Perhaps the important thing is to have a plan b. Contrary to what some politicians seem to think there's no shame im having one of those. We can never be sure things will always go our way.

I wonderful poem. It has a touch of Shakespeare to it. Well done.

I enjoyed that. Well done.

A more mature kinda poem on finding back to our true purpose in life & persevering (going on, instead of succumbing). Good work!

I enjoyed your poem. Well done.

I enjoyed this piece of writing. Well done.