United States • 48 y/o • MaleReviews Received
I love all the colours you mentioned! the way you wrote is wonderful! hope you continue to write
I enjoyed this piece of writing. Well done.
I enjoyed your poem. Well done.
A more mature kinda poem on finding back to our true purpose in life & persevering (going on, instead of succumbing). Good work!
I enjoyed that. Well done.
I wonderful poem. It has a touch of Shakespeare to it. Well done.
I see what yoi're saying and a lot of people will relate to it. A lot of us have had to give up on a dream for one reason or another. Some of us fail using one way, then find another that works. Some people loose one dream but find another that fills the gap. Others are not so lucky.
Perhaps the important thing is to have a plan b. Contrary to what some politicians seem to think there's no shame im having one of those. We can never be sure things will always go our way.
The technical aspects of poetry are not my strong point, but the sentiments are appropriate for our times.