United States • 23 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Okey, here's my review:
Positive - really got the audience wondering what will happen next and the pot line is going slow enough to get the setting started and gave the reader a sense of what's happening.
Negative- it seems that in some places you forgot to read over the text and it was hard to follow what a few mistaken words meant. I advise reading over it out loud.
(I'm trying the whole criticism thing - am I good at it yet?)
Great so far!! Please do write more! -KP
I feel like it was kind of rushed, but it was still a very good story :) It left me speechless too
i really feel like i can relate to this
I can definitely relate to this. I've been there and still am most days. Hang in there.
Loved it :)
touching!
