Optimism101

HEY! No self hate! You are an amazing human being, I can already tell. You have so much to look after in your life. Don't waste the fun times feeling down for yourself. But... I'm also here to review the work. It's good, fits its purpose, and well written. BUT STILL! Be nice to yourself. Please.

ooooooo, romance! These stories always get to me, and have a special place in my heart. Not only that but it was wonderfully written! The characters are all their own, not different faces to the same person. Well, in some ways. I can't wait for more!

"Never give up, up up. Never let go go go. Never give up. Never let go. You can reach your end goal."
-Pewdiepie, 2016
It's a nice poem that transverses a sad story. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

I... I'm sorry. Nobody deserves that. This poem is heavy. Tough, and hurts. But... it is very well written. The lyrics ring deep and resound withing. It's a sad poem, but a beautiful one.

Awww, I love the happy story :P. It's nice! Very peppy :). Keep writing! We will keep reading.

And so the romance-in-a-literal-almost-hellscape-world-filled-with-people-that-can-literaly-murder-you-instantly begins.

Oof. Sorry, old habit. ANYWAYS, It's a nice story. It makes a character and a world in which unknown details are filled in by the original song. Also, the OP is kinda a jerk. He was getting married to someone and left her. It seems like an endless cycle, with the fiance being the new Op. Otherwise, it's a nicely written story with much emotions. Keep writing! We will keep reading.

It's some good fluff. The flashback is in amazing detail, and I'm not sure if it was a dream or the past. ()-() It's a nice story. Not sure who lit the fire though. Mom, daughter, or son. Who knows? Keep writing! We will keep reading!