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I'm so intrigued to read more about Lu. I would've put more description into the hideout where she saw the stares personally, but that's just how I am. I already have an idea of there looks besides the boy without green eyes and Henna. It's so interesting
Sir Ayren seems like one of those people I read in mangas who are crooks. I'm not sure if he just seems that way or if he's actually a crook. I'm very interested in the boy with green eyes. I can already imagine the boy without a description. Also, did you mean: "a white woman with sleeves" instead of "a with woman with sleeves"
Amazing
Alright. You and your "four review" Thing. I don't care if I have to force three of my friends online or not to review I WILL read the next section! WIth the predictions. I see a bit more... humanity from the characters in this section, but also that crippling darkness eminating from Mistress Silver. Lef and Turin... Not sure what to feel about them. I liked this segment. We learn more, and she is starting to get suspicious of the place. Anyways, Keep writing! We will keep reading!
Another great part to a series! Adds more description about Ren, and sets him up for greater stuff later! (Personal predictions. My friends hate movie nights with me) Still so many questions unanswered, but I'm sure they will be answered due time. Keep writing! We will keep reading!
Another nice part to another nice series, can't wait for the next bit!
Well, Henna is weird, and Sir Ayren seems kinda fishy, but I'm sure there's more on that later.
I think I agree with melissak (again :3). I don't really know what it is though. Something to consider about the dresses is that they might have tried to give her less fancy dresses to help her ease into her new life. Less frills, less poofyness, less lace, but still soft and silky. Also, about how old is Lu?