United States • 23 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Part of the thing with the name is the style your going for. Lu sounds (to me) like a name of a fantasy type world. Names like the ones melissak suggested fit the world, and the ones I would say most fits your style are Keon or Yusuf, although the others are fine as well. The names sound a bit too rich for a poor boy, especially if he's an orphan. I looked up some names (although I feel like that's never very satisfying), and I found a few that were okay.
Ern
Pepin
William
Liam
Most of the others were kinda weird. Hope this helps!
Nothing seems too rushed. It works nicely. I can't wait for the next part. Soooo many questions! I'm sure all will be answered in good time. Keep writing!
I liked this one. More questions, of course, but that's one of the benefits of short stories. A good part. Keep writing! Oh, if you need a girl name, I always liked Jessie.
It seems like she's more worried about fashion and herself than the boy, who is yet to be named. She seems to be moving too fast into acceptance then she would be in real life. I would think she's still in shock and less worried about her wardrobe. It's a good book though and I hope you continue. Seems like somethings missing though, something crucial, but I can't put my finger on it.
Honestly, I struggle with names all the time. I always search up: Random guy (or girl) names. That way it's easier. I only do it when I draw a blank on names though
I love this book. The separation, details, and the characters. I'm not one to really understand big words or stories, even though I love them all, but it's still great. I'm intrigued, it reminds me of my view when I was a child. I was poor without parents, even though I wasn't an orphan, and could barely survive. It's sad, but relatable to many people. I wanna see where this book is going. I'm glad I was able to make time for reading it. :)
I like it. It's... interesting. I have quite a few questions about the characters, all of which I'm sure to figure out from the story or what I can piece together. Either way, you've set up a pretty good dystopian (I think) society where you have the upper and lower class separated completely. I'll be waiting for the next bit. Keep writing! Because people will keep reading.
I got a bit confused at the end, but overall I liked it