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Thomas Ray

ThomastheRay is from US United States • 22 y/o • Male

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Reviews Received

Dari-the-bookworm
Dari Poulson reviewed Lu (Part Two)

This is so good!!!
(I'm sorry I'm so late reading these! I wish I had come earlier!)

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TheValhallan
Optimism101 reviewed Lu (Part Three)

Nothing seems too rushed. It works nicely. I can't wait for the next part. Soooo many questions! I'm sure all will be answered in good time. Keep writing!

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Aishlynn
Skylar reviewed Lu (Part Four)

Well, Henna is weird, and Sir Ayren seems kinda fishy, but I'm sure there's more on that later.

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TheValhallan
Optimism101 reviewed Lu (Part Four)

Another nice part to another nice series, can't wait for the next bit!

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TheValhallan
Optimism101 reviewed Lu (Part Five)

Another great part to a series! Adds more description about Ren, and sets him up for greater stuff later! (Personal predictions. My friends hate movie nights with me) Still so many questions unanswered, but I'm sure they will be answered due time. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

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melissak
melissak reviewed Lu (Part Five)

I'm so intrigued to read more about Lu. I would've put more description into the hideout where she saw the stares personally, but that's just how I am. I already have an idea of there looks besides the boy without green eyes and Henna. It's so interesting

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TheValhallan
Optimism101 reviewed Lu (Part Six)

Alright. You and your "four review" Thing. I don't care if I have to force three of my friends online or not to review I WILL read the next section! WIth the predictions. I see a bit more... humanity from the characters in this section, but also that crippling darkness eminating from Mistress Silver. Lef and Turin... Not sure what to feel about them. I liked this segment. We learn more, and she is starting to get suspicious of the place. Anyways, Keep writing! We will keep reading!

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melissak
melissak reviewed Lu (Part Six)

I love this book!!! I wanna read more! Silver has a weary vibe to her and makes me question a few things. I'm curious about what she means by voices and why Sir Ayren is being super nice to her. I imagine him looking really scary, but if that's the case why does he speak so sincerely? I understand the shock that Lu can read and I'm shocked shes not hypnotize by the green eyes again. Poor girl has to deal with Fin haunting her though. Something bigs going to happen though and Fin has something to do with it. The only trusted person in that house seems to be Ren and Lu, but thats just how I see it. This book has my imagination going wild.

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