Terry Adcock

Nice build up. Just the kind of story that makes you want to look over your shoulder . . . or perhaps not! You know that old adage about what you don't know can't hurt you . . . yeah, right!

Don't . . . Look . . . Back . . . Seriously! --- Well done!

Thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Like sunsets, we, ourselves, are ever changing. An uplifting reminder we are different people at different times in our lives. Well done.

I found this story drew me in from the beginning. I liked the city descriptions like I was on a walking tour along with the narrator. Excellent story.