United States • 26 y/oReviews Received
Your few words have no real impact or relevance. I fail to grasp what point you were (presumably) trying to make.
This reads like the whining of a bratty child who cannot get her own way and not what you claim: the true feelings of a teenage girl.
Other's have presented similar works and done a much better job of it. This really is not good.
Not sure what you're trying to say with this piece. It's too short and disjointed at the moment.
Short but I do understand what you are saying. Keep writing and move forward. You can make it as anything you want to be. I have high hopes for you has a fellow writer.