WynnBrothers

Thank you for the story. I hope that you continue to write more on here. :)

Wow...shocking ending. I wish the story was longer.

I just died inside. But one thing- what happened to the dread? The inability to move and speak? The heaetbreak? I think it was well written but it would make the reader more powerfully emotional if you had added the feelings running through his head when he was told about his wife.