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Abandoned Car
Abandoned Car

Abandoned Car

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It was a cold day, it was mid december and I clearly remember it was foggy and my friends and I did a shortcut to get to the mall faster, it was a dark and a woodsy area but it was better than to go through a crowd just to get to the mall, it was a good idea at the time.. Not until we found the car, my friends and I looked at each other with curiosity we walked closer to the car, it stank really bad as if there were dead animals on the car itself, my friend tiffany said

“Maybe we should open it, maybe there could be valuable stuff in there”

I replied “Maybe not, there could be something in there that we shouldn't see"

“What's the harm in a little fun ?” said Tiffany

She opened the driver's seat door, to reveal a knife, newspapers and an old cloth filled with red liquid on it, we gasped at the horror.

“We should get going !” said Jackie

We nodded but before we left we saw a piece of a shirt sticking out of the trunk, we looked at each other with fear in our eyes, I went to the trunk, tiffany tried to stop me and said

“Haven’t you watch horror movies and seen what happens when the victim opens it and it doesn't go well ?”

“Maybe someone needs help !” I replied

I proceeded to open the trunk when a wave of a nasty scent crept into my nose, we all covered our noses , only to find a dead body all skeletal with pieces of skin still attached to the bones, we all screamed and panicked not knowing what to do, when suddenly my friends and I looked up from the trunk to see a dark figure holding a knife grinning, we all screamed and ran, we ran like there was no tomorrow… be aware of abandoned cars the truth is..we don't know what happened..

Author Notes: This my very first horror story, to be honest I think I could have done better, let me know what you think !

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Posted
20 Dec, 2019
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329
Read Time
1 min
Rating
4.6 (5 reviews)
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