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An Angel's Death (Part 2) Reviews

6 reviews have given an average rating of 4.8 out of 5 Stars
Muxima
Muxima gave a rating of 5

WOW! Very Int story I took time to read this story and I was really enjoying it thanks for making this beautiful story in this site it deserves five Stars keep up the good job!
😭😱

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Zack
Zack thank you so much
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Riven
Riven gave a rating of 4

Seems really interesting, can't wait for the next part. However, when a new character talks you should put a new paragraph bc my eyes were going mad trying to figure out who was who and saying what. Otherwise, good job.

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Zack
Zack Thank you for the advise. (I haven't had internet in a while so sorry for responding late.
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xXGLB-LifeStudioXx
xXGLB-LifeStudioXx gave a rating of 5

Ooooo- a cliffhanger? Reeee! This was getting good! I can’t wait to see the next part! Have a nice day, be you, stay safe! Peace.

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Zack
Zack Thank you, you too. (sorry I haven't been able to respond due to my lack of internet over the summer.)
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xXGLB-LifeStudioXx
xXGLB-LifeStudioXx No no, it's fine! And your welcome! Your actually a good writer! Keep it up buddy! :3
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Darkness
hvdiyya gave a rating of 5

You know when you leave it on a cliffhanger, everyone will want more. Good work, bruv

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Zack
Zack thank you, I was hoping it was good enough
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hvdiyya
hvdiyya It is, dude. Write more!!!
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Zack
Zack part 3 is already out so you can read it.
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hvdiyya
hvdiyya YAS. cya when I read it!
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Zack
Zack lol
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HelloStranger
𓆩קhσꫀɳi᥊𓆪 gave a rating of 5

ooooo a cliffhanger spicy. Good job it’s great!

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Zack
Zack Thank you!
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TheWeridDuckling
TheWeridDuckling gave a rating of 5

Very EpIC

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Zack
Zack thanks cheese ball :)
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TheWeridDuckling
TheWeridDuckling your welcome cheese
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Zack
Zack XD
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TheWeridDuckling
TheWeridDuckling have u read guilt yet nerd? im planning on p3 soon
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Zack
Zack lol no I go read it now
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