Your writing skills are awesome! Everything is understandable as well, I really enjoyed the final product as said below, and I wanted to say you’d be a good writer in the future! Keep it up, work hard to achieve, be you, be safe. Peace!

Your such a good writer! This is amazing. Just a tip for future writing. When writing one line of speech, and wanting to do a second one add more description around, so it's more of a narrative, and it'll be a future skill for writing. Other than that, great. Will there be part 4?