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7 reviews have given an average rating of 3 out of 5 Stars
neehu
neehu gave a rating of 3

the title the end all just falls in place.Maybe you can add a bit more description...maybe he can go through what happened during the day and the suspense can be that hes the one who is going to die.Just a random though that i got after reading the story .....:) but overall it was good

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Andy (Formerly Apemann)
Andy (Formerly Apemann) You clearly do not understand the concept of a micro-fiction story. The idea is to tell a complete story in just one hundred words, which is what I have done (many many times!) Brevity is the name of the game...
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Aurora Harrison
Aurora Harrison Ur so rude
Aurora Harrison
Aurora Harrison Instead of saying u clearly don’t understand just explain kindly what it is. U have a very rude manner. U should learn how to talk to people
JozayBigras
JozayBigras This man is single and forever alone for that reason. Terrible manners.

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