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Breathe
Breathe

Breathe

justme2304justme2304
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my thoughts

light as air, existing.

from the start to the termination

I breathe.

my mind

fuller than life- but with death- still existing

beautiful beginning to desolate denouement

I breathe.

my body

broken, but existing.

born whole, dying scarred.

I breathe.

my whole

a shell, broken, depraved of life. I cease.

from entrance to expiration

I could breathe-

No longer.

Author Notes: I don't love this poem.... Feel free to give honest opinions and/or constructive criticism!

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justme2304
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Audience
12+
Posted
15 Feb, 2020
Words
61
Read Time
<1 min
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Rating
4.5 (2 reviews)
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