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Butterfly Kisses Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 5 out of 5 Stars
hercules
hercules gave a rating of 5

I really loved that. Well done.

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AaronTheRocker
AaronTheRocker gave a rating of 5

Astounding. Striking. Stupefying. Breathtaking- just a few words to describe this.

The symbolism of butterfly kisses and it's fragility to the human condition is oh so beautiful in connection. From emotion to events and interactions of peers to the mental state of one's being, it wraps together like a blanket. Also, not to mention, that you took characteristics of red and blue symbolism (tears and blood) to create a hopeful loving color of purple (a kiss).

Personally, I'd recommend for a more noteworthy of a read (not that it isn't) would be to confront a certain passage.

"The thunder of their screams
Humanity is being torn apart
Excruciatingly"

Sort of took a step off the path. Although it followed the theme and idea of the writing, those lines seemed to "veer" a little from the flow, but none the less went back on after. Just my personal take.

Can't wait to see what other material you may put out.

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