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Ceasebury: Chapter Four Reviews

-Lynnyan-
Lyn gave a rating of 4

aw, man, i cant do sexual things- let me know when it gets back to normal so I can hop back in tho! For your typos, I suggest Grammarly. It can be wrong sometimes, so u have to keep an eye on it, but most of the time it's really helpful! I don't think Valentine is the right Match for Theodosia. He seems unable to understand the fact that a woman is more than an object, as he said, "Are you going to take advantage of me?" It sounds to me like he just wants to, uh, take advantage of her. I don't really like him. I'm also mad at Dorian now though, for leaving his sister alone for so many years. I hope their relationship can mend. And in the meantime, maybe he can save Theodosia from Valentine's greedy personality.

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Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik
Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik Grammarly isn't available where I live... what have you got against Valentine? LOL
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Lyn
Lyn idk, i just dont like em
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Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik
Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik Fair enough LOL, see of he improves next chapter, he starts to show his more personal side, I've started writing it
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Lyn
Lyn i shall give him another chance, MAdam
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Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik
Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik Thank you LOL
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