Woah, okay, Marquess Ravenswood seems a bit rude, but I'll let that slide. Why won't Dorian be kinder to his sister? It seems the only person who actually cares for her is Theodosia! I swear, boys are so complicated. I feel bad for Dorian, though. if he changed after the death of his mother, he must've had a strong bond with her. I hope I can learn more about Ravenswood in the next chapter. You had a few typos, as well, but I can't remember where, so maybe just go over your writing and fix them. It was a great story though, I'm still very intrigued!