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cemetery (draft) Reviews

IanG
IanG gave a rating of 4

You describe the setting very well and your narrator's experiences are convincing. I'd have written "where an elderly couple grazed a mule" or "kept a mule" as they owned it wherever it was. Otherwise, well done.

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scorp
scorp thanks for the feedback!
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