i love this so much

As a person who has read the entire Harry Potter series multiple times your piece is very convincing. Draco was always one of my favorites, I think everything he does has a deeper meaning. Cannot wait to see more work like this, good job.

Draco's feelings in this piece are very convincing. It fits well with the original stories. I recall that at the very end of 'Deathly Hallows' Harry glimpses Draco at the station, but while they're not friendly they don't show fear of each other. That being so the bit about him trying to reform fits too.

I really enjoyed your piece of writing. I brought to mind Darth Vader still having good in him. Well done.