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Everyone Thought She Was Happy Chapter 1 Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
Lollipop_56
dreams™ gave a rating of 4

Very good and I love it! Great start. But I hope in the next chapter we know the name of the main character and like Thomas Ray said, this person needs some joy.

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ThomastheRay
Thomas Ray gave a rating of 4

I like this. You better make this a little more happy in the next chapter, because, while I do like sad things, this character needs some joy in her life.
This story has potential, so good luck!

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Callie_Writes
Callie_Writes thank you. I might make it a little happier.
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