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-Lynnyan-
Lyn gave a rating of 4

Nooo, i dont want my imaginary friends to fade. Writing about them shall keep them alive >:3
A lovely story, though. I think it might sound better if the imaginary friend acted as a child might, though. Instead of calling Timothy "dear," try calling him "buddy" or something. there were a few grammatical mistakes, but those are easily overlooked. Over all, it was pretty good! I enjoyed reading it :)

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Jan Brooks
Jan Brooks Thank you, and I will definitely work on my grammar skills :)
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Lyn
Lyn You're very welcome!
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