Gentle reminder: Be careful when you rhyme, sometimes it IS really hard to find a rhyming word that makes sense and doesn't upset the grammar of English. Otherwise great job!

Its a good piece. The way the monster is described as being one and none is very interesting. To be honest I had to re-read a bit because I read the last line with a British accent and I was pretty sure that wasn't how it was supposed to go down, but that doesn't throw the quality down in any way.
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