Flowers Reviews
3 reviews have given an average rating of 3.3 out of 5 Stars
write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Poor grammar and dialogue punctuation is hampering your work. Please make sure that you spell-check before posting. It only comes across as lazy otherwise, and you don't want that.
What should have been a pleasure to read was spoiled because the story is riddled with spelling and grammatical mistakes.
Take time to CHECK your work before submitting it. Your computer has spell-check and thesaurus facilities: use them!
On the plus side, there is a budding story-teller in you. Iron-out the clumsiness - and laziness! - and you will become a fine writer.