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Forbidden Love (Part 1) Reviews

3 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
Aspen-Faye gave a rating of 5

part 2

Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 3

There is the basis here of a good story. However, clumsiness and failure to check your work before submitting it for publication is in danger of undermining your efforts.

I would advise that you re-read the site's Submission Guidelines. Your work, as presented, breaches a number of them. They are meant to HELP you produce the best work you are capable of. Ignoring them - or not bothering to red them at all - is really not a good idea...

JustSomeGirl For you information I'm 13 and my English is not the best, and I did read the headlines, while I dislike most of your stories they are grammily correct, however I bealive you should ask before shoving your input or ideas where they are NOT wanted
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ghostgirl1108 if u have a problem with a kid just like i am then dont say anything u purve (andy formerly apdmann) leave the poor girl alone dam
Madison_Writes gave a rating of 4

Part 2!!! :)


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