Spilled Secrets Reviews
2 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
Good job, I like the emotion.
I do wish you would CHECK your work before submitting it! There are numerous spelling mistakes in this piece, which are unforgivable as it is unnecessary. You spoil your work through your laziness. Make the effort to use the spell-check facility on your computer!
On the whole you write well and entertain. You are often better than the work you submit. This piece is not your finest hour, neither is it your worst.
Aspen-Faye I was really mad at someone when I wrote this and now that I look back at it I see what you mean. But in my opinion I said all that I need to say and I think that my mistakes add to the fact of my anger and the overall message of what I'm trying to say in this poem/story.
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