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Hansel & Grettle Are the Bad Guys Reviews

4 reviews have given an average rating of 5 out of 5 Stars
Legolas_Greenleaf
Legolas Greenleaf gave a rating of 5

I love it! The idea that the witch was allergic to gluten and sugar-free was funny! I agree that the ending was a little abrupt, but I understand how since it's a school project it has to be short. The unedited version of Malhuqu Presidium was a very abrupt ending for me too because it was a school project and I was already pushing the limits!

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Durandal
Durandal Thanks!
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melissak
melissak gave a rating of 5

I wish I read this sooner!

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Durandal
Durandal Why? Is it that good? It was just a school assignment.
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melissak
melissak Its interesting
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Durandal
Durandal I'll take that as a complement
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melissak
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Tessissweet11
Tessissweet11 gave a rating of 5

I like the way you told it in the First-person, even if the end was a little too abrupt.

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ThomastheRay
Thomas Ray gave a rating of 5

While the execution was really good, the premis is just genius. The ending almost felt too down to earth after the story we were just told, though

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Durandal
Durandal Thanks, this is probably one of my teacher's favorite assignments that I have done. It got me a good grade, and it was fun.
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