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If Only She Knew Reviews

-Lynnyan-
Lyn gave a rating of 5

Beautiful! The last sentence needs a capital letter and gat is actually spelled got. Maybe add an apostrophe S at the end of she, like: She's got no clue. A beautiful poem, keep writing!

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Mkushi
Mkushi Ok noted thank you very much
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Lyn
Lyn glad i could help :D
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