JULIA Reviews
3 reviews have given an average rating of 4.7 out of 5 Stars
this is such a cute story i love all of your detail and the story line is perfect
The 'cuteness' factor of your story is what saves this from being just another mundane story about getting old. It is well told with a touch of humour and maybe a little pathos, too?
One or two punctuation and spelling errors mar your piece, especially the use of 'ipad'. Please ensure you check your work thoroughly before submission. Other than that minor criticism a very creditable effort :-)
salpa58 Thank you Apeman, I will try to be more careful in the future. Thanks for the four stars :o)....
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First-ever Apemann it's me your biggest fan again hey hmmmm I hopeto hear more of you.😆
I really liked this particular piece. The story line was cute, and I know I'll probably sound silly but reading this just made me happy. Very well done.
salpa58 Thank you for your comment. I like to make people feel happy.
I would also like to thank you for the 5 stars :o))))) that makes me very happy.....
I would also like to thank you for the 5 stars :o))))) that makes me very happy.....
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