Last Moments Reviews
2 reviews have given an average rating of 4.5 out of 5 Stars
This is pretty gnarly.
I noticed that it's only two sentences, but that's what made it perfect because I thought of it as a narration that someone is saying so you don't listen for breaks in a sentence, but the overall idea of how it flows together.
Respect.
_Sky Thanks bro. You got it right, I was thinking of it as an introduction for a story, but didn't pay attention to this detail that you mentioned, so I'll try to get it right next time...
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I really enjoyed your story. Well done.
_Sky Thanks man :)
I'm really glad that you liked it. Besides, it was my first storie, so it really means a lot!
I'm really glad that you liked it. Besides, it was my first storie, so it really means a lot!
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