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Lock Your Doors Reviews

5 reviews have given an average rating of 4.8 out of 5 Stars
dumper
SJD ❤ gave a rating of 5

so scary but i love it

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Spooky-toast
Spooky-toast gave a rating of 5

Greatest horror I've read in this app I love it keep it up

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hopelessromantic14
hopelessromantic14 gave a rating of 4

Loved the cliffhanger!

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Dari-the-bookworm
Dari Poulson gave a rating of 5

Wow! I'm never leaving my window open ever again!
This was really good! Keep writing stuff like this!

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Oxygen
Oxygen gave a rating of 5

HOLY COW! That cliff hanger tho. Good job. You made me want to hide under my bed. Keep on writing

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dreams™
dreams™ Ha! I remember talking about this story idea in class! Great job! If you want some constructive criticism, I have some...
First of all, a really good story. You should be proud. :P
But, at the beginning, explaining the person's environment and what was happening, I think there's a lot of "I". I did this. I did that. To improve the writing, it will be better if you use fewer "I" to make it flow better.
Besides that, its great!

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