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My Heart Has Been Stolen Reviews

6 reviews have given an average rating of 4.5 out of 5 Stars
Ellethevillain
Ellethevillain gave a rating of 5

My heart have been stolen too,,,He had said all those flowerly sentences but then at the end the 3 meaningful words he had said became a memory of mine.

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AaronTheRocker
AaronTheRocker gave a rating of 4

This was a great setup for the reader to receive the emotion when reading.
One thing that could be done is by having "You know my favourite song and I know yours" towards the beginning. When I read it, I felt drawn away from the progression of the whole idea or meaning behind this. Overall quality though was amazing.

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ASwordslasher
ASwordslasher gave a rating of 4

Simple and beautiful. Keep it up 😊😊

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aricalatham
aricalatham gave a rating of 5

this is my dream relationship!!

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SJD ❤ it may come true
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Rosa_0023
Despicable_Moi gave a rating of 5

Awww... this is soooo sweet! I love that even though it's short, it has a huge and lovely message. I think you just summed up everyone's dream relationship! ;)

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ThomastheRay
Thomas Ray gave a rating of 4

I really relate to this. I love it. One thing that might be better is if instead of "I then say I'm sorry" it says "you listen as I say I'm sorry" because I feel like most of this poem is directed to "you". Most lines start with "you" and so on and so forth. So continuing with that seems more natural.
Still, I love the emotions behind this.

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