I would be scared out of my mind. When I was in 1st grade, we heard a gun sound by the school and I was terrified. Beautifully written and keep it up!

This story really puts you on edge. If my friend was in the locker and the man knew about it I would have gone after my friend, if I died at least my friend wouldn't. The note at the end is very good. Keep it up!

Very good! I especially liked the author's note. A very similar experience happened to me when I was about 7. Keep up the good work!