My Strange Friend - My Cupboard Reviews
2 reviews have given an average rating of 4 out of 5 Stars
Your story was kind of hard to follow. But from the parts that I could understand I think it's coming along.
Though if you could add names for the characters and patch up a few errors I think that it could be spot on. Good job! ^^
Muxima Thanks my friend
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There is a lot of potential here! A handful of your grammatical errors are quite easy to fix, and that will entice readers to stay longer to read a bit more. If you want some advice or want to ask me to shut up, feel free to message me.
Muxima Thanks my best friend for the encourage I know you like speaking the truth and it is also my first time in posting here thanks you very much for rating and also giving a comment it is very hard to see people like that thanks my friend you are a star in writing stories I hope you continue writing here. 😘😘😘😘
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