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7 reviews have given an average rating of 4.9 out of 5 Stars
runnerbean13
Jane Bean gave a rating of 4

What a powerful idea! My only criticism is that I think it would have worked better as a longer piece. Show actual examples of his bullying at the beginning, instead of telling us. Show how his classmates react to him. Be more gradual with him starting to bully his sister online. I'm afraid I guessed the outcome as soon as she was introduced.

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SamZ
SamZ Thank you very much. I'll certainly try to do better next time 😊
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Jane Bean
Jane Bean I'm so sorry if I was criticising your work! I was just trying to say that it would have worked even better as a longer piece.
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SamZ
SamZ criticisms would help me get better at writing, so I'm pleased 😊
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ask_again
ask_again gave a rating of 5

that brought tears to my eyes, daymn, that sad. its soo good thou

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SamZ
SamZ thankk u soo much πŸ’“πŸ’“
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Durandal
Durandal gave a rating of 5

Nice. It's sad that things like that actually happen.

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SamZ
SamZ true!
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epops
epops gave a rating of 5

very good 😁

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SamZ
SamZ thank uuu
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Sentimental_creature
β™₯ ᡍ๏вℓ𝓲ℕ β™₯ gave a rating of 5

(ｑ ́︿ ̀ｑ) this story is so sad, yet so sweet and inspiring. Keep it up! I love ur work!

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SamZ
SamZ thank u soo much!
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Carmen
Clouds gave a rating of 5

That was amazing!
And sooo deep.
keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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SamZ
SamZ πŸ™ thanks a tonπŸŽ€πŸŽ€
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Clouds
Clouds np
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