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Nobody Road Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 5 out of 5 Stars
FabioLanzoni
Aaron Sebastians gave a rating of 5

How you kept adding onto it was amazing. It started from more of the simple stuff and added to deeper and more personal levels.
Nicely done.

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kiraafinifrock
Kiraa gave a rating of 5

I appreciate the honesty in this. it reminds me of how we block out memories to cope with trauma and the despair that comes through shame, fear, and anger. The desire to not have an identity in an attempt to reclaim this can be so strong.

The creativity in how you gradually went through the process of not existing is really cool here too. You started with the messages through family and told a story within each of the four line stanzas. I really liked that.

Our worth isn't in our productivity and we aren't defined by the toxic messages of our past-- just a friendly reminder.
Hope all is well.

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AaronTheRocker
AaronTheRocker Your thoughts are a canvas, your attitude is the brush, your words are the paints, and your actions is what creates art.

Thank you for your insightful comment. I have a feeling when you read works you dig deep down and discover how it connects with you with others and that is beautiful.
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