Our House is Your House Reviews
2 reviews have given an average rating of 4.5 out of 5 Stars
Oh dang!...
That's a hell of an ending.
Reminds me of the movie Mother! with Jennifer Lawrence and Javier Bardem. But the movie is very much symbolism whereas your story is direct with a little extra 'filler' moments to add spice and wholeness to it.
Not too shabby of a writing.