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Princess Reviews

4 reviews have given an average rating of 5 out of 5 Stars
yaboyrobert
Robert Thornton gave a rating of 5

Haha, I really liked this story. I understand this struggle so much!

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Lollipop_56
Zer0 gave a rating of 5

This made me laugh because it's so true! I have so many inspirations, ideas swarming my head like a beehive and then when I finally settle down to write, I think it's horrible.
I had a great laugh and keep up the great work!

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Thomas Ray
Thomas Ray Thanks! You keep writing too, eventually you'll write one that you like.
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Dari-the-bookworm
Dari Poulson gave a rating of 5

This was really funny. The end is usally what happens to me with most of my stoires! XD
I love it!

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Thomas Ray
Thomas Ray It happened quickly.
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MistyJJP
Misty Poulson gave a rating of 5

I think it's amusing, it definitely shows a lot about you. And in remark to your comment below your title, I should have you know that NO story is a waste of time. And can be later built upon or even viewed by a reader as creative and something they NEVER would have thought of themselves. I also thought the jump between the point of view of the story being written within your story to the author in your actual story, was an interesting element that definitely added to your story.

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Thomas Ray
Thomas Ray Yeah, the story of why I wrote it is a little odd, and I didn't have much attachment to the story even as I wrote it. It ended when the princess was shot, and when I put it on here, it didn't seem like a good ending, so I shoved the author in. I agree, everything I write is good practice, and I do like the story. I just had the more critical side of me come out in the author.
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