See Yourself Through My Eyes Reviews
I've read this over and over, I love it so much
Its simple, elegant.. yet beautiful.
This is a super inspiring story! Great job with it!!!
A good, confident beginning for a novice writer. I hope to read more from you :-)
BTW: the BRIEF description of the story section is meant as just that - a few words about the story. There is no need to go into as much detail as you have.