Shoes Reviews
4 reviews have given an average rating of 4.3 out of 5 Stars
That's dark, but it's a true representation of some people's lives. Good job!
I really enjoyed your story, although i didn't expect this to be the direction it took. I kept trying to figure out what it was but when i actually found out, my heart broke just the slightest bit. You portrayed your characters very well and it made it seem all the more real. Good job!
Amber Jones Thank you. Characterization is very important to me and I'm glad I communicated the right emotion to you.
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Cutest story tbh
Amber Jones Cute? XD That's a first
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Mr. Mills just the truth
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What a brilliant start! But then I got very confused in the fourth section... I think with a little work here, it has the potential to be a great piece of work.
I look forward to reading more.....
Amber Jones Thank you. Do you suppose it just needs to be more clear in that section or do I need to tie it into the story a different way?
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Lussac In my opinion, just that section needs to be clearer
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Amber Jones Ok, thanks! I'll work on it!
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