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By Aaronlime1

In 1420, In a city very far away, Nalfar was a beautiful and thriving city, Nalfar was ruled by King Zartomus, King Zartomus had a very beautiful daughter, Princess Ralaina, some say that the only thing that was more beautiful than the City of Nalfar was King Zartomus's Daughter.
In the City of Nalfar they celebrated every good occasion, and had a very big festival. On this specific festival it was Princess Ralaina's Sixteenth birthday.
Needless to say everyone came to this tremendous event. Everyone came to see Princess Ralaina's Sixteenth Birthday, Dukran, Lamian, Ekko and many other. Most of the night was filled with Dukran secretly trying to find some way to get Princess Ralaina to be his wife but the Princess has turned him down many times in the past but that wasnt about to stop Dukran from trying.The Princess was seen with Lamian the whole night talking and laughing, Now, Lamian doesnt live in the City of Nalfar, he lives in a small village a couple of miles away from Nalfar, In the Lost Village, But Lamian wouldnt have missed this for the world. Even though Princess Ralaina and Lamian lived so far away they still managed to keep in touch through Mail carriers on horseback.Princess Ralaina Really wanted him to come to the festival even though King Zartomus didnt let "outsiders" Come to the festival because of the Fearlocks that live just twenty miles from the city of Nalfar, But King Zartomus let Lamian come because he knew that Princess Ralaina really liked Lamian. Lamian was a bit thrilled about this day concidering King Zartomus wont let the Princess officially date until she is sixteen so Lamian was trying to build up the courage the whole night, But right when lamian built up the courage to ask her to date him he hears the King's assistant's voice threw the Large ram horn saying that the Festival was over. Lamian was reluctant but said goodbye to princess Ralaina and left the city and headed back to his Village. It was now 12:00 midnight and Princess Ralaina was talking to her friend all night about Lamian and how much she likes him. No more than an hour later she hears footsteps out at the front corridors, so she decided to go out and see who was up, it was by her surprise to see five black figures wearing masks and swords on their hips Princess Ralaina knowing something was not right she tries to run to her room but shesees another black figure, she looks at him and said with awe "Its you, leave me alone...." her voice is distorted by the black suited figures hand. The black suited figure said in a whisper "don't even dare try and yell my name". They put some chmical on a peice of cloth covering her mouth and nose, after some time of stuggling she gets knocked out, and they drag her across the corridors and put her on horseback on her stomach while she has her hands tied she is taken away during the night. Now when the morning comes the Kings servents hear the king let out a shreak they quickly come to his aid and see the King holding the covers with a tear in his eye and a grip in his fist. The assistant comes into the room and sees him and quickly tells him that he should have a town meeting, and King Zarotomus was trying to gain his composer while agreeing to his assistants suggestion and tell his assistant to call all the people of the city to come to the Town Meeting. After everyone in the city gets settled in the Town square, The king announces "Princess Ralaina has been taken
by unknown forces". Everyone in the crowd was looking at each other with confusion and started yelling with awe. The assistant tells them to quiet down. The king begans to speak again.

Part 2

But there was only one person that had any clue of where she was and his name was Dukran
King demanded, Where is she. Dukran replied, She was taken by the FearLocks.
King Zurtomus said with awe,How do you know this, Dukran said with a half smile,
I heard them lastnight in your front corridors. King Zartomus demandingly asked,
Why didnt you stop them, Dukran replied, they had already gone when i got to the front corridors
,I can rescue her on one condition I get Princess Ralainas hand in marriage.
The King said with a roar, No i will not, It is her decision weather or not she will marry you.
Dukran said with a condescending tone, Fine if you would like your precious daughter to get torchered
and killed by the treacherous Fearlocks be my guest but personally i think you should let me
take her hand in marriage if i can prove to you and her that i am a worthy protector of her
then will you let me take her hand? The King said with disapointment,Okay you can have her hand
Just save my daughter.

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