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2 reviews have given an average rating of 5 out of 5 Stars
Oxygen
Oxygen gave a rating of 5

periodt.

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TheValhallan
Optimism101 gave a rating of 5

Ouch

I truly hope this isn't based off of past or present circumstances. However, it is a good piece. Very good. Nice rhyming work. Some of those words could be improved for a better rhyme, but otherwise it is very nice.

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king
king hehe thanks! and I agree, some rhymes are kinda cringey but that's ok
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