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IanG
IanG gave a rating of 3

You could've made more of your narrator's reaction to the death of his uncle. Did he change his attitude to the beach due to that? If so, did he draw on memories of better times and so begin to enjoy it again? Perhaps he realised that nowhere is ever entirely safe and if the sea hadn't taken his uncle then something else might have.

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Storm
Storm Indeed he did! That is what happened, this was something I wrote a couple of years ago during high school. Not one of my proudest pieces.
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