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THE BIG SPLASH
THE BIG SPLASH

THE BIG SPLASH

herculeshercules

THE BIG SPLASH

Written and narrated by Ben Brown.

A father takes his five-year-old son on a log flume at Flambards theme park in Cornwall.

One scene.

Lucas: Father

Marcus: Son

SCENE

Theme park

Father takes son on ride.

LUCAS

Are you sure you’re ready for this, Marcus?

MARCUS

Most definitely.

LUCAS

You look a little scared to me.

MARCUS

Course I’m scared. I love scary rides.

LUCAS

I know you do.

MARCUS

Well then, what are we waiting for?

LUCAS

Okay!

MARCUS

(Marcus climbs into a log with Lucas and the ride begins.)

Off we go!

LUCAS

Off we go!

The log goes around one meander, then another, until it reaches a steep ramp.

MARCUS

Up we go!

The log begins to move up the ramp.

LUCAS

Higher!

MARCUS

Higher!

LUCAS

Higher!

MARCUS

Higher!

LUCAS

Higher!

MARCUS

Higher!

The log reaches the top of the ramp.

LUCAS

Down we go!

MARCUS

Down we go!

The log plunges down and gives a mighty splash. It then shoots round two more meanders, before coming to the end of the ride.

LUCAS

(Lucas climbs out of the log with Marcus)

Did you enjoy that, son?

MARCUS

I sure did.

LUCAS

Would you like to go on it again?

MARCUS

Yes please.

THE END

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