The King of the Woods Reviews
This is a good start for a young writer. If you want to improve it, explain why the princess is always so sad. Perhaps her father offended the same witch who turned the prince into a bear and so she's under a curse too. If not, perhaps someone she cared about died young for some reason.
Kat Dickens I wrote this when I was really young when I was in 4th grade, and I didn't really want to change it from the original I wrote, so that is why I did change it at all.
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IanG That's okay Kat. Good luck with your writing.
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