I really liked this story despite all the gore and horror stuff. Keep on writing.
P.S. maybe add more of a background for the characters.
There's a little bit of grammar errors, and a little bit more backstory about the friend would be nice in my opinion, but overall decent story!
I love this story! I love our detailed descriptions! I felt I was there watching all of this happening. I was a little weirded out, i'm scared of blood etc.. but this was really good!
Another disjointed, mishmash of a story. Your poor spelling and inappropriate use of certain words ruin much of your work and this is a prime example. This is just not a very good piece of writing.
I like that you choose variety of superficial topics. Kudos!