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6 reviews have given an average rating of 4.2 out of 5 Stars
Oxygen
Oxygen gave a rating of 5

I really liked this story despite all the gore and horror stuff. Keep on writing.
P.S. maybe add more of a background for the characters.
Good job!
:D

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auroraharrison
Aurora Harrison gave a rating of 5

This was an amazing story! I don’t care what rude people think about ur story. It was brilliant! I hope u keep writing like this😌😌😊😊😊

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sorrynotsorry
sorrynotsorry gave a rating of 4

There's a little bit of grammar errors, and a little bit more backstory about the friend would be nice in my opinion, but overall decent story!

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Kat
Kat Thanks!
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BookishForever23
BookishForever23 gave a rating of 5

I love this story! I love our detailed descriptions! I felt I was there watching all of this happening. I was a little weirded out, i'm scared of blood etc.. but this was really good!

Good job!

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Kat
Kat Aw, thanks!
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apemann
Andy (Formerly Apemann) gave a rating of 1

Another disjointed, mishmash of a story. Your poor spelling and inappropriate use of certain words ruin much of your work and this is a prime example. This is just not a very good piece of writing.

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Kat
Kat I wish you would stop right now. I love that you're taking the time to read my writing, but giving me this hard of a time is really ticking me off (excuse my language). Please, next time you review, tell me exactly what I did wrong, and I can fix it. If I spelled something wrong, tell me. If I had a grammar error, please do tell me. I don't mind constructive criticism. But what you're doing isn't helping as much as you might think it is.
Thank you.
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Andy (Formerly Apemann)
Andy (Formerly Apemann) What you ask for I have done -many times - in other reviews and in private messages. Your attitude and refusal to take good, helpful and constructive advice is what is spoiling much of your work. You don't seem to want to hear what is wrong with your work, only how good it is... My honesty upsets you because I don't give false, undeserved praise. I make no apology for doing so.
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nesh
Nesh gave a rating of 5

I like that you choose variety of superficial topics. Kudos!

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Kat
Kat Thank you!
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