Tortured Reviews
10 reviews have given an average rating of 4.5 out of 5 Stars
There's a little bit of grammar errors, and a little bit more backstory about the friend would be nice in my opinion, but overall decent story!
Kat Thanks!
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I love this story! I love our detailed descriptions! I felt I was there watching all of this happening. I was a little weirded out, i'm scared of blood etc.. but this was really good!
Good job!
Kat Aw, thanks!
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Another disjointed, mishmash of a story. Your poor spelling and inappropriate use of certain words ruin much of your work and this is a prime example. This is just not a very good piece of writing.
Kat I wish you would stop right now. I love that you're taking the time to read my writing, but giving me this hard of a time is really ticking me off (excuse my language). Please, next time you review, tell me exactly what I did wrong, and I can fix it. If I spelled something wrong, tell me. If I had a grammar error, please do tell me. I don't mind constructive criticism. But what you're doing isn't helping as much as you might think it is.
Thank you.
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Andy (Formerly Apemann) What you ask for I have done -many times - in other reviews and in private messages. Your attitude and refusal to take good, helpful and constructive advice is what is spoiling much of your work. You don't seem to want to hear what is wrong with your work, only how good it is... My honesty upsets you because I don't give false, undeserved praise. I make no apology for doing so.
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I like that you choose variety of superficial topics. Kudos!
Kat Thank you!
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