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Yells After Wars Reviews

2 reviews have given an average rating of 4.5 out of 5 Stars
ThomastheRay
Thomas Ray gave a rating of 5

This is very good.

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ASwordslasher
ASwordslasher Thanks sir
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Thomas Ray
Thomas Ray I just reread it and it made me tear up. I'm not entirely sure why my second reaction was so extreme, but I must say again, this is really good.
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ASwordslasher
ASwordslasher Aww.. the more you interact with something the more you know it. Thanks again 😊
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TheValhallan
Optimism101 gave a rating of 4

Wars are never good. I feel it could use some rewording, but otherwise, it's good!

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ASwordslasher
ASwordslasher yes suggest the places where rewordings are required dude
I'll do it
thanks
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Optimism101
Optimism101 "asking' reason they were killed for" is one. I feel it's a little convoluted. "To learn lesson from their suffering" is another. I feel like with some edits and working, maybe a second draft, it would be amazing!
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scorp
scorp I agree. But it is an amazing poem! Beautifully written.
ASwordslasher
ASwordslasher humble gratitude miss
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