Still can't believe that he's gone. You did a great job, you move people's hearts and I love it so goddamn much!

It's amazing, nice story development, really made me understand why he wanted to kill himself that badly. However, I would suggest that you should elaborate the part where the mother blamed the boy a little bit more, but nice story!! Keep going ;)

Beautiful story, and sad ending. Just the kind of story i like!

This was a good storie...I never wrote many stories mine suck...but this is very good please check out some of my stories and message me so I can get some good ideas...

Love,
Maddie ❤️

Personally I believe that every story, or poem is meant to make the audience feel something, whether it be happiness, or sadness. And this story seemed to give off a lot of emotion, it makes the reader feel something, which is what I think the whole point is. Good job