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13 reviews have given an average rating of 4.3 out of 5 Stars
IsLoveAnIllusion
-- The Huntress -- gave a rating of 5

Still can't believe that he's gone. You did a great job, you move people's hearts and I love it so goddamn much!

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Jailbreaker01
Jailbreaker01 gave a rating of 4

It's amazing, nice story development, really made me understand why he wanted to kill himself that badly. However, I would suggest that you should elaborate the part where the mother blamed the boy a little bit more, but nice story!! Keep going ;)

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mike333
mike333 gave a rating of 3

A story with a ring of truth about it, perhaps. I think your pen name on this site says a lot about how you view yourself as a person.

Good Luck,

Mike.

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NoOneCares
NoOneCares gave a rating of 5

Beautiful story, and sad ending. Just the kind of story i like!

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Mdfessler
Lonely girl😭 gave a rating of 5

This was a good storie...I never wrote many stories mine suck...but this is very good please check out some of my stories and message me so I can get some good ideas...

Love,
Maddie ❤️

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TheForgotten
TheForgotten gave a rating of 5

Personally I believe that every story, or poem is meant to make the audience feel something, whether it be happiness, or sadness. And this story seemed to give off a lot of emotion, it makes the reader feel something, which is what I think the whole point is. Good job

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