Your Fault Reviews
I have officially read everything you have put on your profile so far (because if I read one story from someone and get hooked I can't stop) and right now I think you write a lot of really sad stories. Can I dare you to write a happy one? Just a dare.
Anyway, I love the use of words and the way you describe his backstory and desicion. Gosh that's a sad ending.
-KP
I loved your use of words and the topic that you chose to be honest. I would like to read more from you.
I thought it was really good, do not listen to apemann he is wrong.
Really nice and descriptive. Slightly dark, but in an enjoyable manner. I would possibly recommend it.
Yet ANOTHER tiresome and boring story on the subject of teen suicide. This topic has been (if you'll excuse the pun!) done to death already. Sure, it's a slightly different slant on the genre, but it's still a teen suicide story.
You can write, no doubt about that. PLEASE try something that hasn't already been done a thousand times before next time?
Final paragraph was my favorite, good story.